3 Proof-Readers, Please

[Velvet D'Coolette]

Hi everyone.


First of all, I want to apologise because I feel like I don't contribute here any more. I occasionally come over, look at the topics, almost invariably realise there isn't anything productive I can say because it's about ongoing comics, or other stuff I don't have much to say about, and then I leave, rinse and repeat. I sort of feel like I sponge off this place, but that really isn't my intention.


Right okay. I've got that off my chest and welcome any responses to it. The other thing I came for was for exactly what my title says: I'd like three proof-readers. I'll be posting this same thread at FUS, so I'll take a total of three between the two forums. Assuming enough people are interested, of course.


The story I'd like you to proof-read is experimental. For anyone who has read Counselling For Toads, it's based on the same idea. It takes place over Season 1 of Sonic SatAM, telling bits of the story you're all familar with, but from a psycholotical perspective. However, the main focus is that Antoine goes for counselling.


I haven't finished it yet but I've got to a stage where I'd like feedback on the first half of the story. I'd like to hear some peoples' feedback so that I know whether it's interesting or not, whether the ideas in it are confusing or clear, whether the characterisation fits well enough, whether the pacing is too fast, too slow or just right... that kind of thing.


Would anyone be interested?

[Lynchenberg]

Sure thing.

[Velvet D'Coolette]

Thanks! Well, any time you want to go ahead, it's linked in my signature.